Move - Brina Courtney Good story to make teenagers become aware of the dangers of being an alcoholic. Sadly, the topic is something we can find around us more often than not, but that helps the reader to feel closer to the story. This short novella is based on a very good premise; however, the many mistakes and the messy punctuation kept me distracted, since it made reading difficult. Poor editing makes the reading flow slower, and that's something that certainly puts me off.