Amanda's Fantasy
This erotica short story is too short to have a full development of the plot. What happens in this story is a bit difficult to believe, so it's hard to get hooked by the story. Besides, the plot is totally predictable. I guessed the ending almost from the beginning. I don't like that in books; I like to find twists that make me gasp and prove that I am wrong when I try to predict what will happen. Enjoyable story, but not good enough.
