This short story needs a lot of editing and proof-reading. The messy punctuation kept me distracted most of the time. The story is quite hollow too. Indeed the story is too simple, so it doesn't interest me so much. I need plots that can hook me. I am not even curious about what will go on afterwards with these two characters. It didn't tell me anything and it didn't make me feel anything. I have more books by this author in my Kindle and I will read them, but I won't read more short stories dealing with Penny and Luke.
